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[原創七律]某君如是說（方言）

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某君如是說（方言）

忍看時時興大發，競爭鑊鑊打崩頭。

愁多惹落成身病，食醉唔驚一肚油。

不到黃河心不死，無拘白髮染無休。

是非常有非常出，管得清流順逆流。

成身，猶修身，粵語有周身、全身之意。唔，不。

首句不入（下平十一尤）韻仄起式。

上去平平平去入，去平入入上平平。平平上入平平去，入去平平入上平。

入去平平平入上，平平入入上平平。去平平上平平入，上入平平去入平。

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